** environment actions

  '' character thoughts

  "" character speaking

  My name is Erick Blackeman I was your average looking guy though I rarely spoke my mind.I went to college,never got married and you can laugh at me if you will but I never had sex,and to top it off i'm 30.I was a heavy rpg gamer that spent all my money on games and action figures.Sadly enough I died a virgin wearing khaki pants a vest and glasses at my job as a bank teller.Enough of that lets talk about the day I died.

  *beep beep beep* Erick:"Shut up." I get up from my bed then walk to my dresser and turn my alarm off.

  I then did my daily routine of taking a shower,brushing my teeth, and getting dressed for work.

  I start the regular walk to my job.Nothing really special happened other than a few people swearing but that's normal in new york.

  After the 20 minutes of walking I arrive at the bank I went in and everything seemed to be fine until a masking man came in with a pump shotgun.

  *BANG* ???:"Everybody get on the ground this is a robbery!" *Everybody gets down to the floor*

  ???:"If you all cooperate I promise you wont be harmed,Now whoever knows the code to the vault stand up and come over here."

  This story has been taken without authorization. Report any sightings.

  Erick:"I do."

  I get up off the floor and walk over to him.

  ???:"Okay then what's the code mister...?"

  Erick:"Its Erick Blackeman."

  ???:"Okay then Erick,if you would please tell me the code so I can be on my way to my grumpy wife."

  '...that's unfair god why are you so cruel to give him a woman but not me!'

  God:"Because he has done something in his life." God says in a calm voice

  '....'

  ???:"Hello?"

  Erick:"Sorry... I believe the code is 6-7-6-5-8-9."

  'If I remember that code will activate the silent alarm'

  ???:"Why thank you,and may you have better luck in your next life."

  *BANG*

  I fall on the ground.

  'How strange have I been...Shot!'

  I look down at my body

  'Wait a second is that my rib cage?'

  I look up to that masked man he was laughing.

  I smile and say.

  Erick:"...Fucker..."

  Everything turns black.

  ___________________________________________________________________

  I am new to this kind of stuff suggestions are welcomed ^-^